My very first comic. I'm so excited, so happy!!! I've learned so many things while making this comic. Haha, I'm SO proud! It's not the best, but it's better than nothing! Oh my, you don't even know how proud I'm! After weeks, finally finished!
Too many exclamation marks, sorry _____________________________________________ BIG thanks to for double-checking my writing Without her help I wouldn't finish it. Really big thanks again! _____________________________________________ Please comment - what do you like about this comic? What don't you like? Any tips? Thank you in advance.
I LOVE LOVE LOVE the art style and colours used in the comic. Also, the message is really profound, I have found that what this comic says is true form experiences in my own life, especially about running and pursuing things so that you don't miss opportunities in the future. All the different angles of view you used make the comic very engaging and I'm glad that you did that rather than drawing from one perspective the entire time.
I can't really find anything I don't like, but I did notice there was not a 'replay' button at the end, perhaps you could add that?
Don't have any tips for you I'm afraid, I know very little about digital art or comics in general.
Thank you for comment! I'm glad you noticed that I was changing perspective during the comic You're right about replay button, I will add it in my next comic, that's a good idea.
Also I'm very happy that you "experienced" something like that. I still remember how I felt when that first bus was driving away and I turned around... It was such an eye-opener!
No problem! It was hard not to notice, made it much more interesting
I know right? My moment was when I had procrastinated on doing these illustrations for a book and since I didn't have anything planned that day, I thought my procrastinating wouldn't hurt me since i wouldn't be affecting anyone else, just me (stupid thinking I know). All of a sudden, my Dad walks in and says he's planned for me, him, and some friends to go to a movie later that day. Since I had not gotten anything done, I had to painstakingly tell him I couldn't go and he just went on his own with the friends. It was then that I realized that even when you can't see what's in the future, does not mean that opportunities are not there. You should always work like you have a deadline because, as I found out that if you don't, you end up missing out on things. I didn't realize that until that particular moment.
I can't really find anything I don't like, but I did notice there was not a 'replay' button at the end, perhaps you could add that?
Don't have any tips for you I'm afraid, I know very little about digital art or comics in general.
Wonderful work, very inspiring
I'm glad you noticed that I was changing perspective during the comic
You're right about replay button, I will add it in my next comic, that's a good idea.
Also I'm very happy that you "experienced" something like that. I still remember how I felt when that first bus was driving away and I turned around... It was such an eye-opener!
It was hard not to notice, made it much more interesting
I know right? My moment was when I had procrastinated on doing these illustrations for a book and since I didn't have anything planned that day, I thought my procrastinating wouldn't hurt me since i wouldn't be affecting anyone else, just me (stupid thinking I know). All of a sudden, my Dad walks in and says he's planned for me, him, and some friends to go to a movie later that day. Since I had not gotten anything done, I had to painstakingly tell him I couldn't go and he just went on his own with the friends. It was then that I realized that even when you can't see what's in the future, does not mean that opportunities are not there. You should always work like you have a deadline because, as I found out that if you don't, you end up missing out on things. I didn't realize that until that particular moment.